un: vogel | German text Around Fragment

[insinning]

Has anyone else been finding pieces of German text around Fragment?

I can help with translating them if you need it. I don't know if I'm the best at it but these haven't been too hard... [So says the actual fluent German speaker]

This is what has been found so far:

[From Akatsuki's findings]
Unknown where the Cursed Wave was born…
After the stars doth cross the heavens,
The sky in the East doth darken and air doth fill with mourning.
From the chosen land beyond the forest, a sign of the wave comes.

[From Winter's transcription of the music in the Holy Forbidden Church]

The shadowed man on the quest for the Twilight dragon. The shadowed man will not come back here in search of the Twilight dragon.

[From Lumina Cloth, up in a high building that Oriade and Vogel were investigating while flying]

Riding the wake is ██████, the Shadow of Death, to drown all that stands.
Mirage of Deceit, █████, Betray all with the flawed image, and did aid the Wave.
And by the Power of █████, a drop from the Wave doth reach the heavens, and creates a new Wave.
With the Wave, ████████, the power to tell the dark future, hope darkens, sadness and despair rule.

The last piece of the poem has words missing, but I can't work out what it might be. Does anyone else have an idea?

edit: 12/9

I forgot to mention I found another piece in Naval Monte:

█████ schemes when swallowed by the Cursed Wave.

█████ seduces with the sweet trap.

Wave reaches the Pinnacle, and escape none can. ██████ still remains with more cruelty to punish and destroy.

And with the turbulent destruction after the Wave. Only a void remains. From deep within the void arrives ████████.

Perhaps then the Wave is just a beginning as well.

Comments

[insinning]

that would also be creepy. Like a ghost.

[gluttoning]

That's a relief.

The heat's already hard enough to deal with. I know rhere's a list of side effects from too much play now, but some of this just seems a little too weird.

[gluttoning]

Oh.

I meant the statue, but a ghost would be cool. Kind of creepy, but still cool. Maybe.

But not if it put people back in the hospital.

[dissimulative]

like a grand bell?
the kind they put in tall towers
were you the only one who heard it?

[secondthoughts]

LOL Thanks

[ Definitely. Watch out, resident German translator! ]

1/2

[secondthoughts]

I guess something like that. It was pretty distinct. I don't remember it being very bell-y.

[secondthoughts]

Lol actually Yael was with me. Maybe he gave me the migraine. the bastard

[secondthoughts]

Yeah. It's not good.

Don't be online longer than you need to be. Log off if you feel bad. Shoot me a message if you need anything, Misteaks. It's "just a game" but I'm serious about this. Take care of yourself.

[dissimulative]

LOLOLOL
what did he do?!
make you sick with his cringe??

[gluttoning]

Don't worry. I have a future I have to focus on. My family needs me.

Don't look at any more weird walls that make submarine noises, Hector. I'll get worried. You can't go to your restaurants this year if you're feeling sick.

[secondthoughts]

[ UHHHHHHHHHH ]

Pretty much yeah LOL

[secondthoughts]

:-) Thanks bud. I'll be fine. No need to worry about me.

[gluttoning]

So long as you're serious.

Will you let us know if you see other weird stuff?

[secondthoughts]

Yeah.

[ Though he hopes he doesn't. ]

Same goes for you.

[gluttoning]

Loud and clear. Thanks. :-)

[insinning]

[Oops that isn't exactly what he meant, but you know what, he wont elaborate]

yeah. that'd be bad. it's already bad enough with everything else

[dissimulative]

[ Amazing. I hope Hector talks about this to someone, since Oria's getting the idea that he doesn't want to tell him (and he understands why). ]

ewwww
i bet he was trying to be cool again

un: UTA

[tot]

Do you think that's the order of how the poem should be read?
Like the order that we found them.
Or should we consider seeing how it should be ordered...or reordered.

[insinning]

You're right. The song lyrics don't belong there, but it could be an important hint for the order of the rest of the poem.

[tot]

Right?
If this is written in German, maybe it follows the way that some old German poems are told too?
Such that it is a song within the core of the poem itself.

[insinning]

[oh, someone else who enjoys poems and songs??]

Mm. That's the difficult part, actually. Translating it while keeping as much of the imagery and structure intact...

[tot]

[ in this forum thread...sinclair realizes that uta is all about songs. hopefully. ]

It's an extremely hard thing to do no matter what language you're dealing with.
I doubt that I would be able to do as well as you did with the German I know.
Danish, however, is another story!

[insinning]

[ Exciting developments are occurring. Also, ah--]

Are you from Denmark?

[tot]

I am!

[insinning]

Wow, so you know Danish, German and English then?